Picture Book Endings that Circle Back

“The end never comes when you think it will. It’s always ten steps past the worst moment, then a weird turn to the left.”

-Lena Dunham

I’ve been struggling with endings lately. So I did my usualthing—went back to some of my mentor books. And I found three books I want totalk about:

• I Don’tLike Koala, written by Sean Ferrell; illustrated by Charles Santoso

• Bike on,Bear, written by Cynthea Liu; illustrated by Kristyna Litten

• Bob, NotBob!, written by Liz Garton Scanlon & Audrey Vernick; illustrated byMatthew Cordell

In each of these books, the ending circles back--in some way--tothe beginning. It’s a type of ending I find very satisfying, for a few reasons:

• These endings often bring in a last drop of humor—always a good way to engage readers (and listeners). Humor can (in a good way) undermine the story theme just a little bit, making that theme more “digestible” for a young child.

• They can give the child a chance to make connections. This adds to their sense of themselves as a reader, which—in turn—takes them a step deeper into loving to read.

• They can re-open the story from a new angle or pose the possibility of a new story that branches off from the old one. These endings help a child step into imagination and discuss what could come next and how it might be the same or different as what has come before.

Bike On, Bear

Bear is good at everything except riding a bike. He triesover and over, even follows all the instructions from a book on bicycling. Buthe can’t do it. At least, he can’t until a kid (yes, a baby goat!) is indanger. Then everything Bear has learned comes together. He jumps on a bikeand—without even thinking—he rides to the rescue. Bear is honored with an awardand with the lines “In fact, Bear could do practically anything. Bike on,Bear!”

But those lines aren’t the ending. One more turn page andone more word: “Except.” Because Bear also doesn’t know how to swim.

Note: There is not a drop of “message-y” feel to Bike On, Bear. I love it—Bear isdelightful, and the book is a beautiful example of using sets of threes to tella story. But the book does have a theme; it goes something like: If you persist, you’ll achieve your goal, witha corollary of,Often, when you least expect it.

But, with the “Except,” the author has loosened up the beautifullywrapped packaged, just a little, making more room for the child to identifywith Bear. They always have to trynew things, definitely more than once, and so does Bear. This connection candeepen the child’s empathy with Bear, and—in doing so--can deepen their understandingof that extra story layer the author is trying to share.

I Don’t Like Koala

In I Don’t Like Koala,Adam repeats the title sentence over and over, about Koala—a plush toysomeone has given him. Because Adam is afraid of Koala, he tries everything toget rid of the toy. But Koala always shows up again. Not only that, but Adam’smom and dad keep reminding him not to “forget” or “lose” Koala. The storyresolves at the end of the day, when Adam can’t go to sleep because the shadowsin his bedroom are too frightening. Once he realizes, however, that Koala’sscariness works on the shadows and that Koala will keep him safe, Adam falls soundasleep.

Again, that’s not the ending.

On the final page, Adam’s parents see Adam asleep, withKoala beside him. And Adam’s dad says… “I don’t like Koala.”

Children will recognize the final repetition of thatsentence, and they’ll see that this is a new twist on the words. They’ll laugh,and they’ll wonder whether Adam’s dad isafraid of Koala now. Connections like this are the building blocks of readingand, equally important, of a child’s beginning to identify themselves as aReader. Children will feel a sense of ownership about the sentence; many willdemand to “read” it each time they ask for the story. Which, in all likelihood,will happen again and again.

B♡ b, NotBob

Little Louie sneezes, the first sign that he has a cold—acold that makes “Mom” sound like “Bob,” the name of Little Louie’s slobberyGreat Dane. Every time Louie calls for his mother, he gets Bob. The confusionand the frustration and build until both Louie and Mom are exhausted. Worn out,they curl up together for a nap—pretty much what Louie has wanted all along. Louieeventually gets better, playing happily by himself again, and calling—thistime—for Bob to join him. Louie doesn’t need his mom quite so much now, but, ”…hethought it was awfully nice when she came running too.”

Ending? Ha! Turn the page.

Mom sneezes. AndMom’s sneeze creates an opportunity for more story, presenting one of the bestand most important questions a book can ask a child: “What happens next?” Howwill Mom sound with the cold? How will Louie take care of Mom? How isBob—despite being so well-meaning—going to get in the way this time around? Anending like this sparks a child’s imagination, making room for their ideasabout ways they might add onto the story or even go back and change part of it.Now the book is not only helping to grow readers, it’s helping to grow thinkersand—depending on how each child chooses to express their ideas—writers, actors,illustrators (and probably a few veterinarians).

The circle-backs in each of these books does more than oneof the things I listed above. Pick them up, read them through, and explore theendings for yourself.

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