Add-On: First 20 Pages Critique
Send in your first 20 pages, and I’ll give you detailed written feedback on what is working, what questions I have, what questions you might consider as you move forward. I’ll look at both the scene shape and structure and the first pages as a set-up for the whole novel. After you’ve had a chance to digest my comments, we’ll have a 45-minute Zoom meeting where you can ask any questions you have, or think through new ideas you have together. Use within six months of completing the course.
Send in your first 20 pages, and I’ll give you detailed written feedback on what is working, what questions I have, what questions you might consider as you move forward. I’ll look at both the scene shape and structure and the first pages as a set-up for the whole novel. After you’ve had a chance to digest my comments, we’ll have a 45-minute Zoom meeting where you can ask any questions you have, or think through new ideas you have together. Use within six months of completing the course.
Send in your first 20 pages, and I’ll give you detailed written feedback on what is working, what questions I have, what questions you might consider as you move forward. I’ll look at both the scene shape and structure and the first pages as a set-up for the whole novel. After you’ve had a chance to digest my comments, we’ll have a 45-minute Zoom meeting where you can ask any questions you have, or think through new ideas you have together. Use within six months of completing the course.